Review Detail of Garessta in Hope: The Beast Mistress

Item: Hope: The Beast Mistress
Rating: 4.2

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GaresstaLv32yrGaressta

The writing style has some questionable word choices and lacks the clarity and flow in my opinion, in comparison to my idea literature, but for webnovel, its pretty food. Characters... Ok, I've only read two chapters and I wont hide it, but they are one-dimensional cardboards. Drake in particular looks like a cutout villain more than any ML I've seen. The plot? I don't think this story needs one so much. In comparison to characters. But I think it would've been better with a better start than "local (dragon) lord was bored so he picked up random virgin who attracted people's attention to mess with her". As realistic as it is, it lacks a punch.

Hope: The Beast Mistress

HelenBold

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HelenBoldAuthorHelenBold

Thank you so much for your feedback! I will try to improve the word choices, clarity, and flow. As for the plot and characters, they unfold as you go into the story. In the first chapters, you will see only the surface, which appears plain and simple. All will be unveiled in time step by step, including the characters' true selves and the plot.

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