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Review Detail of Kaberial in Naruto the Spartan of UNSC

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Kaberial
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The writing started out okayish the first two chapters and it all went down hill from there. From the third chapter on, it felt like I was reading machine translated work.

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Naruto the Spartan of UNSC

cielfathan

Liked it!

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cielfathan
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thanks for your comment i know that but i Will work hard for continue this novel and i am sorry about that my English is second language