Extremely high standard grammar for a novel on Qidian. And don't take those words lightly. When I was reading the first chapter, what my mind noticed was how smooth I could read the novel even more than the story at that point. THEN I noticed the story. The author obviously has a plan for this. I even went to deviantart to get a closer look at the map. If this clues anything, it's that you can expect a well thought out, grammatically good story with expansive world-building in the future. Even considering the small plot holes, JUST the readability of this novel gives it a five stars. Keep writing my man, and keep doing it for a long time :D
Jin_Daoran
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LIKEBy the way man, I have like read and consumed the whole of your other novel. Too bad the updates slowed, but meh take your time. If the quality of that novel indicates anything, I really hope this one will also break and surpass all my expectations and then some.
Jin_Daoran:Thanks for your words! Keep happy and safe!
catvi:By the way man, I have like read and consumed the whole of your other novel. Too bad the updates slowed, but meh take your time. If the quality of that novel indicates anything, I really hope this one will also break and surpass all my expectations and then some.
There's no romance whatsoever? Even romance subplot is better than nothing. It's too lonely, I feel bad for the mc...
Jin_Daoran:Thanks, I hope I do better this time too!