Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Rebirth of the golden lineage

I really like how you build up the tension within the story. I think the description of the characters and background could use some work. I'd like to envision what is happening and the setting. The story development seems solid. I notice that you use a video game style to describe certain parts of the story, which is a common Web novel tactic. People seem to like it, so I have nothing bad or good to say about it. Keep up the good work. But please add some more description to the story.