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A good novel. Characters are different, interesting and likeable. Only one I don't like is the step-mom because of one very bad scene. Also it would be great if you can focus on some world building and their ambitions, but it's just a slice-of-life so maybe it's not that required. Also bring some Chinese/Korean/European girls, all Indian could be boring, just saying. A good work. Keep it up, author.

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Fulfilling Life of an Urban Time Manipulator

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I have read your stories before. Sorry for that scene, I just thought that it might be possible and thus I wrote it. I was an amateur at that time and...... Thanks for the review and about your suggestions I would like to say, The future's worth the wait.