Review Detail of god_of_the_empty in ESTOY EN OTRO MUNDO

I have read the entire prologue, it is good and the start is spectacular, you just have to improve the writing, do not let it fall crack 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0