Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in THE SECRETARY

A very good story with an interesting plot. The writing formatting and grammar could use some minor improvements. The characters are great and the humor is solid. Dialogue is great. I like the African side of this story, it really makes it stand out. Love scenes are well described and you keep it interesting throughout. Also feel free to check out my fanon spin-off story Avatar: Macai's Journey if you like Action/Adventure stuff (with some romance).