The story has potential I must say! But it needs edits and reworks. Some dialogues were not capitalized at the start and some have no periods. I can assume the author was not a native speaker but it was alright. So was I! Haha...Keep improving your craft and someday you will become one of the best authors here. I congratulate you for trying and that's hats off for you. Kudos and gracias for sharing this novel to me. Love lots here ❤️ Peace ✌️
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