A good beginning. The story started with suspense and is fast-paced right from the get-go. Feels like it will be a thrilling ride ahead! Loved the names of the characters, by the way. Want to know more about Elijah and Yasmine's backstory, which I guess will be revealed in the course of the story. Good job so far, Author-san!
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