Review Detail of The_Celestial_King in The Infinite Mystery

So far so good, to me the story is above average. I like the concept of the story but the execution of it is below average. Certain things are rushed and the author tries to build an air I mystery but he did a bad job at it. The tension is less as the character descriptions. But the concept is very good and it hooks a reader wanting to read more about what will happen next.