Review Detail of HollowGod in The Game of Raising AV Idols

I only have one thing to say and one thing only - from ch 6 to chapter 17 there was no plot development, there was 2 chapters wasted on the "enemy" inner monologue which consisted of - "I'm better, how dare this commoner argue with me, how dare he look at "my" women" and so on. a fight was supposed to happen on ch 6 and didn't happen as of now and it's ch 18...