Review Detail of barbara_mizrahi in Breaking His Walls [BL omegaverse]

The main character was well developed and interesting and the main supporting characters were also compelling and likable. This was my first Omegaverse novel so the concepts were new and interesting to me. The story kept my interest well enough to buy the book, in spite of the fact that the writing was hampered by many errors in English conventions of grammar and punctuation. It was often difficult to tell which character was speaking, the use of plurals was often grammatically incorrect, personal pronouns were sometimes mixed up and the vocabulary was often awkward. The story is compelling, interesting and often very moving. It deserves the attention of a skilled editor and I hope that he author will be able to attain this.