2 Votes from me I hope you win the contest. Overall the story is developing quite nicely. I like the flow and vibe. [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
hi, writer here. thank you so much for the encouragement... and thank you even more for the power stones. I need a lot of them to win this contest, and you a probably the first person who wasn't me to put one down.