Kinda good and interesting story but many unwanted scene mentioned which make it a little bit boring. Hope make it more shows what really needed and reasons to unknown elements
shawn_anderson
Liked it!
LIKEAh sorry about that but the elements that always bothers me were description on origins of things don't mind me I know why you showed them but like every stories I read I always skip to action. Thanks for the new chapter by the way
shawn_anderson:let me know which elements you are talking about and if they are something that shows up I'll let you know. If it is something that I had no clue about I'll try to fix it. thank you