It seems that story was either written of boredom or it is just the first novel of this new author. Anyway, with only two chapters I do not see this story becoming a novel, most likely a super-short story or a short story. This is a nice story, with an good system but it will be much better if you are careful at your way of writing and making the story sound good.
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LIKEThank for your review. I make the chapters short because it will be much more. It's in a process of signing a royalty contract and you know the chapters will have to be at least more than 300. I also have lots of novels to update and I have to balance my strength.but I will extend it a little bit if it's inconvenient for you .
Don't worry if you have more than one story to update. Because we are in the same problem, I guess? But writting small chapter it is good, if you will do much more chapters with much more content when you can. For example, when I do write on JJA, I make small chapters sometimes, but I get my revenge on fillers or in battle chapters... even at the ones who doesn't do much and just wonders in the city.