Review Detail of Stephen_Tsamba in True love: the first is undying

Very good pacing and characterization. I like how you smoothly show the transitions in Duke's character due to the bitter-sweet experiences he faces while coming of age. However, I think you can lend a little more to the setting of the areas in the story. There are also a few grammatical errors aswell but not cringe level so all in all, I like the story.