For starters, great writing. What I love most was that I could easily portray every movement, every emotion, every action taken by everyone so vividly that it was literally out of this world. Second, the flow of the story was great, engaging, and easy to understand. Third, conversations were well written and for the most part, everything felt very mysterious and that's a really good sign. The only problem was that the chapters were too few. Would recommend to upload more chapters. All and all though the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
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