Review Detail of Easy_Tiger in The To-Do List

This is certainly an intriguing beginning to the story. At the moment there are only four chapters (one chapter appears to have been posted twice) and their are numerous characters being introduced, but I am very much looking forward to seeing how these various narrative threads all tie together. The chapters are all well-written and very enjoyable to read. I particularly liked the prologue as it threw the reader right into the thick of the action and provided a hook for the story that follows. The author has created a terrific fictional world with numerous fantastical elements and powers and so far he has done a great job developing the cast of characters. I'm not sure who the protagonist will be just yet, but I would be happy to follow an adventure with any one of the cast so far introduced. So far so good. I hope this story does well in the contest.