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FATHER_OF_LOLIS
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Well, the book is well-written. The only thing that bothers me is because the MC is totally inexperienced but of course he can also gain that, hoping for the story and the MCs stable growth.

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Magic Shop System

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Eternal_Demon
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Thanks for the review.

Nanak_Khazanewala
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ecp

Redzeth
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Hello sir, Im not the artist but Im wondering, since you have some succes with your original novel, why not spend 50 bucks and get someone to draw you an original cover? Would take away some future problems and makes you seem more professional as well.

Eternal_Demon:Thanks for the review.