The first few chapters are great, but as the story goes on there are many grammatical errors and the worst part is that the power level of every charcter is changing. In one chapter Davis's power rank is demon lord rank nine and in the next cahpter it becomes demon lord rank 7. Ther is also Fiona who's power Principality Rank 4 and then in the next chapter it went all the way down to power rank
Tangerines and Watermelons
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