Great novel by the greatest over lord of all time. Apart from me of course I am pretty great :3 But in all seriousness I love how you approached this. Your first novel was a little too rushed but this seems really well paced and your grammar and word choice has gotten a lot better. I wish you luck my friend and have a great time writing this the plot is promising.
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