I have failed to notice any faults with the technical competency. The writing is of a high quality. The story development and character design is hard to comment on. This is due to the present lacking amount of chapters. The world background however, I think was well-made. The book offered an intriguing start, hinting at a vast and unexplored world. It is a fresh breath of air, considering how original the idea is. At least it appeared very original to me. A thumbs up for the creativity. I also liked how straight on the book/webnovel started. Instead of starting in a safe house in the woods, or waking up in a safe cave, I was thrown straight into the action. I am not quite sure if this one is my cup of tea, but I believe the story holds a lot of promise.
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