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Review Detail of YueYe in The String Age : How A New Force Changed Everything

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YueYeLv33yrYueYe

Actually, I'm not really into sci-fi and mystery stories but I've read a few. This story starts out slow but flows smoothly with no sense of interruption between the dialogues and the scene playing in the plot. The characters are distinguished well with their own features and their interactions and reactions are very realistic which makes it easier for the readers to engage with the plot. I love how you describe the actions and the event with simple words but gives a very detailed image in our mind. There are no grammar errors, which is really a plus point. I make mistakes in grammar sometimes too and correcting them really is tiring xD and reading a story with too many spelling mistakes or grammar errors just makes the reading experience feel bland. So I really love this. The author has a good writing style and it keeps the readers at the hook to know what really is going on. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and I will read the rest as well when I have more time. Great job! ^^

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The String Age : How A New Force Changed Everything

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Hi YueYe, what a thorough review you have written! It's really kind of you, especially how you're not fond of sci-fi/mystery. I'll strive to continue to describe the events, the dialog, and the actions in a way that seems natural and flowing. If you continue to read, you will find quite an intense moment in Chapter 5 and a real crisis in Chapter 13 till 18. Hopefully, it will be more to your liking. The second book will feature much more action and actual "magic".

YueYe
YueYeLv3YueYe

That sounds very interesting! I'll read through your book when I have time and am also looking forward to your next work! I love stories with magic in it so I'll definitely be there to read your book! Wish you the very best! ^^

captiun:Hi YueYe, what a thorough review you have written! It's really kind of you, especially how you're not fond of sci-fi/mystery. I'll strive to continue to describe the events, the dialog, and the actions in a way that seems natural and flowing. If you continue to read, you will find quite an intense moment in Chapter 5 and a real crisis in Chapter 13 till 18. Hopefully, it will be more to your liking. The second book will feature much more action and actual "magic".