Review Detail of Cronos29999 in Inhuman Warlock

This started out pretty bad as a generic novel but it somehow kept me reading. It got better after a while story was okish but the grammar started becoming worse and worse. At some point the story starts to branch out in too many directions making it difficult to actually keep up with what's happening. Too many subplots are started to create "suspense" but honestly all it does is annoy the reader