Review Detail of pacul in Inhuman Warlock

Although not a novel concept, still quite an interesting premise, but what good does an interesting premise does without good writing? none. The writing seems to be intended for goldfish. absolutely no need to think or infer, everything is explained even when shouldn't. the plot trigger also mostly stupid, every single characters are basically just puppets for the plot, they made illogical decisions just so certain plot could happen. secretive lab dumping dead bodies of illegal experiments in a public place? lol, elite squad members leaving mc alone in a cell without supervision even tho their team members got slaughtered by him and don't have comprehensive data about his abilities? rofl and the dialogue, oh man, the dialogue is so stiff and unnatural, especially when author intended to sprinkle info or world building. imagine two siblings telling each other what they ate for breakfast even though they ate the same food on a same table. sigh, why am i writing a review that probably would be deleted anyway