Review Detail of Fortunate_Soul in Inhuman Warlock
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Not a good story. It started well enough and had decent promise but the story went downhill from there. The MC is tortured for no reason, and wherever he goes, he comes across people who want to beat him or kill him for absurd reasons and then this whole concept snowballs from there. Not worth reading.
Inhuman Warlock
Demonic_angel
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I quite liked your novel... however big problem is that 'school' arc... gosh, thats boring... you have high octane action and then suddenly go and show this... plus were there any kind of repercussions for gov after the release of the truth and his 'murder'? Because for dozen or so chaps there is nothing explained. Nothing interesting happening. At all. Like... it makes me to just drop it. Because now it feels just so... empty.
Demonic_angel:That aside, it's funny how in one line you mention story started well enough and in second line you complaint about the start itself. But yeah, maybe I'm the one who can't understand the genius intellect of people who can judge Let me guess your rating, sounds fun. World building (1*) After reading just ten chaps where MC barely saw one village, you judged the World building to be absolutely trash. As I said, your future seeing abilities are OP. Let me guess, Writing quality also (1*). Because your genius level can't find even single sense in grammar of the story? Lol 1* is for toddler level grammar which it must be for a great genius like you lol. Stability update (Probably 5*) since I'm sure you won't be blind enough to not see 21 chaps a week in update status. Character Design.... of course 1*. As I said, you saw my whole character and how it'll grow into a less flawed being in ten chaps. Genius again. Lastly, Story Development (1*) Because you definitely read the story and not just the first few chaps to know the development of it. How close was I? lol
That aside, it's funny how in one line you mention story started well enough and in second line you complaint about the start itself. But yeah, maybe I'm the one who can't understand the genius intellect of people who can judge Let me guess your rating, sounds fun. World building (1*) After reading just ten chaps where MC barely saw one village, you judged the World building to be absolutely trash. As I said, your future seeing abilities are OP. Let me guess, Writing quality also (1*). Because your genius level can't find even single sense in grammar of the story? Lol 1* is for toddler level grammar which it must be for a great genius like you lol. Stability update (Probably 5*) since I'm sure you won't be blind enough to not see 21 chaps a week in update status. Character Design.... of course 1*. As I said, you saw my whole character and how it'll grow into a less flawed being in ten chaps. Genius again. Lastly, Story Development (1*) Because you definitely read the story and not just the first few chaps to know the development of it. How close was I? lol
As I mentioned at the start when that arc started, it was a short one which didn't even last 40 chaps. A training arc where he learns more than he would have otherwise. Of course there won't be murder action in a short training arc just like there wasn't even MC was in VU base. Unless you really wanted him to just go around everyone, killing whoever he saw without any plan, without learning how to defend himself and without learning how to be clever in occasions, in the end just being surrounded by everyone.
Dakie_Salamander:I quite liked your novel... however big problem is that 'school' arc... gosh, thats boring... you have high octane action and then suddenly go and show this... plus were there any kind of repercussions for gov after the release of the truth and his 'murder'? Because for dozen or so chaps there is nothing explained. Nothing interesting happening. At all. Like... it makes me to just drop it. Because now it feels just so... empty.
I understand why you had to write it. Important for growth of character, etc... However, I think it could be skipped with the timeskip and shown as flashbacks before important scenes. I guess it would have bigger impact that way. Your training montage feels like the worst between japanese shounen and chinese xianxia. It was really not a good writing. Hey, but, you do you. It's your story. Otherwise the novel is fairly good and I enjoy it. Just hope there will be satisfying revenge/ brutal deaths. And I really hope, the MC won't turn into discount Naruto. I really want him to see to eradicate human race. I think it would be the first novel like that (where the MC destroys the world). And congrats to amazing spots on front page.
Demonic_angel:As I mentioned at the start when that arc started, it was a short one which didn't even last 40 chaps. A training arc where he learns more than he would have otherwise. Of course there won't be murder action in a short training arc just like there wasn't even MC was in VU base. Unless you really wanted him to just go around everyone, killing whoever he saw without any plan, without learning how to defend himself and without learning how to be clever in occasions, in the end just being surrounded by everyone.
Dakie_Salamander:I understand why you had to write it. Important for growth of character, etc... However, I think it could be skipped with the timeskip and shown as flashbacks before important scenes. I guess it would have bigger impact that way. Your training montage feels like the worst between japanese shounen and chinese xianxia. It was really not a good writing. Hey, but, you do you. It's your story. Otherwise the novel is fairly good and I enjoy it. Just hope there will be satisfying revenge/ brutal deaths. And I really hope, the MC won't turn into discount Naruto. I really want him to see to eradicate human race. I think it would be the first novel like that (where the MC destroys the world). And congrats to amazing spots on front page.
Agree 100% This story is absolutely pointless to read. The dark taste might pick your attention at first but then it just senseless circle of hatred and killing. Author don't take criticism very well. And if we connect that with the problems of this novel we can see that there is no substance behind this novel.