Author Review! Alright, after 21 days of this book release and seeing the reactions, I think I am finally ready to review my book. So here it goes: Story Development: It's a Story about a boy who was thought to be powerless in a world where a lot of people awakened with various abilities. Pretty standard, right? But that's when things changed. Seeing that he was useless, they used him for their experiments to test how much pain a human body could bear. Unfortunately, this test didn't stop before he died. His body was tossed away only for him to Awaken finally, not with one ability but with many more. The kid who was thought to be a useless human was someone who was out for revenge. At its core, it seems like a revenge story, but it spreads out in many exciting directions, which I'm sure some of you will like. It's also a villain vs. heroes story where good variants and MC are on the opposite side. World Background: It's a story set in a modern world It'll be a profound and interconnected world. It's a world where Dungeons exist, but monsters can't come out of the dungeons. They can only come out when certain conditions are met. And to make sure that doesn't happen, there are various Organizations. It's also a world where people Awaken with power, so there are crimes involving them, and there are also heroes who stop them and catch the Dark Variants. The world will also involve many more things. I don't think any amount of words can explain it here. So please read. Character Design: I'm trying to make the characters unique, but you shall be the judge of that. I can't comment on this. Update Stability: Daily updates with bonus chapters every Monday or Tuesday. So 5 star :p Writing Quality: I try not to make any errors, but where there's a human, there will be errors, so please forgive me if you see one or two mistakes once in a while. Last Words: I'm sure if you come with an open mind to enjoy a story, you'll like it. It's a pretty interesting story, and it gets even better later. PS: Some people say the story gets a bit dark on occasions, so... reader's warned if they don't like that? But I don't feel like it's too dark, so please be the judge of that. (´;ω;`) Have a great day, thanks for going through such a long review Yours Obediently, Demo- Oh god, why am I writing it like a letter now? (ᗒᗩᗕ) JK, honestly, though, I hope you'll enjoy what you read. If you don't like anything, please comment or inform me in my DMs.
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LIKEDemonic_angel:Yeah, link is bit.ly/demonic1 You can see character images and more there.
If there is, it would be in the next volume after the current arc. I haven't reached there yet so I can't say what it will be.
Matt_pike:Yeah auther is there or will there be romance?
Demonic_angel:If there is, it would be in the next volume after the current arc. I haven't reached there yet so I can't say what it will be.
Not sure about kingdom building at this point but there will be some kind of organization building at some point later on.
Its_weezy:does this have kingdom-building or army building
The world does have dungeons even though they don't play an important role at this point. but anything is possible with other worlds
S3ntinel:Exist also other worlds/planets? A alien invasion with abilitys would be funny xD
Demonic_angel:The world does have dungeons even though they don't play an important role at this point. but anything is possible with other worlds
Demonic_angel:The world does have dungeons even though they don't play an important role at this point. but anything is possible with other worlds