Review Detail of Deem_ in Inhuman Warlock

Just finished reading chapter three. it's a good novel. let's start with writing skills, have to say author did a good job and compared to previous novels, he improved nonetheless. However, while writing seemed monotonous, I recommend author to read more of this genre novels so that you would get typical terminology and terms used in magic realism. While, demonic god novel didn't have good start, cliche I am talking about, I can see, the number of eastern fantasy novels author read as he knew how the cultivation world works and how people thinks. But here, it seems little surreal. Not gonna deny that, this one has good start but little research would bring great changes. Second, I didn't know how author planned this novel, since Mc is only 10 and it's coming-of-age novel, character growth is important aspect to keep tabs on. I guess, author knew what to do. Here are the two novels that has great character development: -The second coming of gluttony. -Lord of mysteries. I am gonna end it here, I can only so much from three chapters. However, I can smell promising future for this novel having nice start. Supposing, it's in WSA, if you pull right strings, you might top other novels, securing good seat. And I'll keep refreshing for new chapter.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Thanks for giving another good novel.