Review Detail of Fall3n_ in ɩ ϝ: Overlord

Review from the author. Hello I'm writing this review and will try to be honest with my thoughts on the story and its later chapters. (Disclaimer: This will be a long review) Writing Quality So far, from what I have found, there have been no terrible grammatical errors, and the spelling should be on par. However, I have had a couple of friends read the story and say that in some parts, they had to double take on what happened, so that's something I want to acknowledge. Also, sometimes I write texts that take time to understand or don't make much sense. So I apologize if that happens to you often. Stability of Updates I can't promise things, but I can say that I will try my best to release them as often as possible. However, I will acknowledge that I have school to juggle simultaneously, so there aren't any promises. Story Development Before getting into the story, I suggest "The Beginning" chapter as it might cover the history of this world and/or later events in future chapters. Otherwise, I plan on making the story move slower than maybe some other novels you've read. From my plan, I can promise action, academy/school life, exploration, and some other things that aren't important... Yet(at the time of writing this). There will be many shifts in the genres as the story continues, and there will be much content. Character Design I enjoy creating relatable characters and like to base the story on real things. There aren't many characters I have listed currently, but there will be a lot more in the future as the story continues. World Background I like the visuals I try to describe when I'm writing and have a habit of telling little details that have no relevance to the story. I enjoy world-building and plan on making that one of the main things to focus on while writing. Thank you if you read all that, and I hope you take some time out of your day to read what I've made. Cheers