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Review Detail of JudgefulCat in Starlight Necromancer

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JudgefulCat
JudgefulCatLv53yrJudgefulCat

Great work overall. The mc character is just kinda off as he looks like he doesn't give a shit about anything but at the same time he gives a shit. The same thing as other characters. They kinda lack emotions. Afterall it doesnt matter what the situation is, their friend still died and a explanation just like that won't be enough to justify the mc actions, especialy knowing that the mc recieve a Superior Lich legacy which can make him a deadly villain in the future and they're experienced adventurers. They can just easily kill him. But other than that. Great work.

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Starlight Necromancer

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I see, I get what you mean! I'll try and make the emotions of the characters a bit more apparent from now on!