Review Detail of LeWil in My Demon Pet System

Thanks for your review. Still, there's no room for plot armor when you have a smart MC that just understood he's a 'chosen one'. I regret that, when a character simply relies on his instinct, just being 'human', you tend to prosecute him like a criminal. Novels are means to live a story on your skin, and how can you feel it real if everything goes fine and sounds perfect? Well, that's not my kind of thing man. I appreciated your comment so much, but remember. Not every 'cliché' (as you think) is necessarily obvious. It may serve to open new scenarios, characters and side stories. Have a nice one 😊

I read your answer which made me happy and sad at the same time. I was happy because I firmly believe that an author who reads their readers' comments and learn to correct their mistakes can write even better stories. Unfortunately, your answer is to justify what cannot be justified.One of your arguments is that MC acts by "human" instinct (simple fact and counter-argument, even for you, you hear a cry in a dark alley, you will not go head-on without bringing a minimum of light and thinking first) not as a "chosen" (second counter-argument, The whole story was shouting out loud [MC acts as if he were the "chosen one"] and the points of my previous comments have already proved it). He even believes, he will save a country that had years of war (if not centuries), barely 48+ hours after its reincarnation (seriously, he should have helped the Middle East and other countries at war before dying). Hopefully your narration will improve and be more enjoyable. Although, I love this kind of story (system, reincarnation and fantasy) but I can’t stand the behavior of the MC (too reckless and full of itself). I think his friend is more appropriate for an MC just for his judgment and his brain though too pushover. P.S: Last thing, the famous and ancient "cliché" of a princess saved by a prince. It is not a good one (back in the time and more nowadays) because it tends to make our daughters, sisters, etc, to believe, that they are weak and that they need a guy to save them (like our princess in her tower). Instead, they should (and could) take their destiny by their own hands because they are definitely strong and autonomous.

I can't agree with the other commenter since I'm one of those that will enter the alley without light though once it has gotten me a knife to the shoulder..... the fact is a majority would ignore it or get a light your character just happens to be the minority

Thanks for the clarification, mate :) As an author, my mc somehow reflects myself so... let me say I'd do the same as Yoichi. He smelled danger and he entered the 'dark alley'. Dark alleys in general may represent metaphors in our everyday life (struggling to be poetic).

and u would most likely die welp ur l8fe is over