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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv12yrCarlos_Balbizan

It starts with the cliché of someone hurting him and he can't do anything... are you dirty? Can such a wound be considered an attempted murder, and the police or the government do nothing? says he barely has money when he could have sued both the other guy's master and the one who attacked him. and then the cliché of playing the game without knowing what to do that his sister gave him starts, I've read many with the same script (literally the same) congratulations for your creativity

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The Adventurer System

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DaoistHyWeOM
DaoistHyWeOMLv1DaoistHyWeOM

Thing is the way you wrote it makes it seem like the injury was towards the upper spine , likely at the neck region. As far as the MC works he is a paraplegic But typically Neck injuries if bad enough Will cause quadrapalegic as in no feeling or movement from the neck down. Generally would have to be lower back damage for just paralyzed waist down

Jigx:Nape, it's affecting his spinal cord. It stops sending the message to his brain. but, thankz
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

the "guide" just mentioned the rarity of having zexel and he wanted to ask why he has 2? mc has negative iq. is it a muscle brain?, not to mention how he was made paraplegic, when he took the punch and ran out of air, the referee should have intervened... was he on his side? and the author writes how it took a while for him to deliver the second blow. not to mention this writing not too bad, but as confusing as MTL... it's just another novel to fill the site's quota probably.

Jigx
JigxAuthorJigx

Nape, it's affecting his spinal cord. It stops sending the message to his brain. but, thankz