Review Detail of Golden_Red_Fox in A Girl's Life in a Gaming World

Item: A Girl's Life in a Gaming World
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

Golden_Red_FoxLv152yrGolden_Red_Fox

Overall it’s a good read and it seems to be heading in the right direction at least in the world building way there has been a few times where the author has accidentally swapped him or her or a he and she. but that happens in more books than most of us realize at least here on this website. for a while there I kind of want to punch something or someone from the time that was wasted and character creation with just talking it was like come on get a move on but that was ok.

A Girl's Life in a Gaming World

M_W

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M_WAuthorM_W

I thought that if I remove the conversations in the character creation there will be too much info dumps. So I just took it slow, Also one of the reasons I just thought of those ideas in the day that I wrote it. And somehow it got too long without me noticing...

2yr

Golden_Red_FoxLv15Golden_Red_Fox

That’s OK it works, just a bit of a track. Keep up the good work expect great things from thIs one.

M_W:I thought that if I remove the conversations in the character creation there will be too much info dumps. So I just took it slow, Also one of the reasons I just thought of those ideas in the day that I wrote it. And somehow it got too long without me noticing...

2yr