It's pretty bad. Character isn't consistent. Writing quality is poor. The idea was decent but the execution is pretty bad. He magically has a search box, and his first thought is revenge. His second thought? Also revenge, on someone who slapped him. His third thought? To learn to fight real well. Rumor has it in several chapters later he finally finds an excuse as to why he can't save his girlfriend. It has no good points. Maybe there's two paragraphs of creativity in the first accident. But a lot of it is just not explained, or makes no sense. The author has virtually no understanding of how anything works, either. Not sure how it's possible to lack that much common sense.
Comfortably Trippy
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