The novel starts out strong but very quickly devolves as scope creep gets introduced. The author seems to jump from major plot points and hand waves important events in between to only mention that it happens afterwards. Major characters in some story arcs are forgotten or retconned out of the plot in the next arc without correcting the previous arc which makes the story seem disjointed. Fun for a pick up, but something to quickly put down again.
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