Review Detail of dewinda_wiradinata in The Lifegivers

The quality of writing is good and neat, but I think it's a bit mediocre. With the addition of more variety of vocabularies, this will be perfect. I love the theme that is unique and different from the usual online novels, so it makes this novel is exciting to read. I'm honestly surprised that it's about alien, thought it will be an usual fantasy genre with magical creatures or something. I gave 4 stars only for world background, because I like more detailed narration on setting. Overall, I love the story, I need to adapt a bit with dirty jokes, but I can handle it. lol! Keep up the good work, Gaasuja! Always love your work!