Review Detail of Lazy_Fox111 in My Goddess System

There's a lot of typos which indicates that this might have been written on the spot, and the slice-of-life feeling that I got from reading this novel reinforce this speculation. The mc is a Mary Sue which I've no problem as long as you make it interesting. Some side characters have Japanese names which made it jarring for me since I thought you would stick with western ones. To be honest, I might've liked this novel in the past but a lot of time had passed since the last time I read this. Now coupled with my webnovel cynicism, I think you need to rewrite this and make the usage of words more efficient like getting rid of unnecessary expositions and following Chevkov's Gun for most of the part.