Review Detail of Masterofall1 in My Goddess System

Writing quality: It's okay pretty simplistic. Stability of updates: Okay/Good. Story Development: For someone who's making their own world/universe, there is a severe lack of descriptions of the planet she currently resides in (read up to chapter 9) how does the economy of the world work? Why are there only 5 nations on a planet that have 60+ billion people? How is the political climate of each nation? What's the name of the 5 nations? Whose military did he serve in out of the supposed 5 nations? How did he make it into the military? How is the military structured in this world/planet? What are the climates of the world/planet? Are there any environmental differences compared to Earth besides the obvious? If the planet has 60+ billion people, how big is the planet? If the planet is so big how has that affected the 'human' race? What are the civilizations like on the planet/world? How is the technological level of the planet/world? If there are 60+ billion people on the planet/world I'd assume the tech level would be pretty high in this world/planet so how is it then, the world has the supposed same technology level as earth, as described by his parents dying in a car crash? These are just some of the things you have to consider when building a world/planet. Character Design: The MC is Naive, stupid, and relies entirely on his system. World Background can be explained in my story development comment/critic.