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I love the story so far, also the character plot and whole state of the world is very interesting for me. The only problem I have is that the character description and Lack of description to what got him addicted besides he had a wife kind of makes things unclear at times. I hope this is cleared up in future chapters! Thanks for the good story regardless.
Changing my life with a level system
Q_Yuumo
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Thank you very much for the feedback, that really helps me understand the view of you, readers even better and improve my writings and stories. As for the matter with the wife, he has none, I presume you are referring to what is said in ch. 1- that is someone screaming in the nearby cellar I tried to make it more clear now, thank you for the feedback. I definitely had planned to give a deeper look into his past and what happened there, just don't exactly know how and when yet. xD
Q_Yuumo:Thank you very much for the feedback, that really helps me understand the view of you, readers even better and improve my writings and stories. As for the matter with the wife, he has none, I presume you are referring to what is said in ch. 1- that is someone screaming in the nearby cellar I tried to make it more clear now, thank you for the feedback. I definitely had planned to give a deeper look into his past and what happened there, just don't exactly know how and when yet. xD