Review Detail of JesReadin in A New Start : Quick Transmigration

Item: A New Start : Quick Transmigration
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JesReadinLv151mthJesReadin

I can’t handle the seriously poor grammar! That plus the rapid plot presentation where from the start everything gets thrown before the reader in the manner of someone upending the contents of their bag on your bed🫤 It’s simply chaotic and feels like immature writing. A shame as the story synopsis sounded interesting.

A New Start : Quick Transmigration

AmrutaShinde95

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AmrutaShinde95AuthorAmrutaShinde95

thank uuu for giving your time to this story. I will try to improve this story & over all Grammer whenever I get time.

1mth

JesReadinLv15JesReadin

That sounds promising ty. I will keep it in my ‘Later’ folder ✌🏻

AmrutaShinde95:thank uuu for giving your time to this story. I will try to improve this story & over all Grammer whenever I get time.

1mth