Tbh, the reviews were high so I had high expectations. The grammar is absolutely terrible, I’m not a stickler on things like this, let’s say after some time the grammar got bad I’d stick with it because I already like it, I mean I used to read Mtl. But it was trash from chapter one, couldn’t even get into it before getting smacked in the face with it, is it kinda readable? Yes. Am I willing to read it with such grammar from chap 1? No.
AmrutaShinde95
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LIKESorry if I came off as rude in my review. I try not to mince my words when criticizing someone’s work
AmrutaShinde95:sorry for the grammar and thank you for still trying to read it. 💞💞Have a great day
no no there is nothing rude, I know I made grammar mistakes and also often confused with spelling.😅 so I know this is quite messy.
Sonuvapotatoe:Sorry if I came off as rude in my review. I try not to mince my words when criticizing someone’s work
Is english not your first language? If it isn’t that’s pretty admirable, I might have hated the grammar but it’s good work for someone that didn’t grow up with english
AmrutaShinde95:no no there is nothing rude, I know I made grammar mistakes and also often confused with spelling.😅 so I know this is quite messy.
no I m from India so my language are Hindi and marathi💞💞 I read your bio, I will follow you on wattpad, do you have name on wattpad 'sonuvapotatoe'
Sonuvapotatoe:Is english not your first language? If it isn’t that’s pretty admirable, I might have hated the grammar but it’s good work for someone that didn’t grow up with english
AmrutaShinde95:sorry for the grammar and thank you for still trying to read it. 💞💞Have a great day
Sonuvapotatoe:Yep, ‘Sonuvapotatoe’ or ‘whatswrongwithgenz’ either one works, it’s the same acc