Review Detail of raven_returns in Primordial Dimensions

Don't know what to rate this novel as I'm still on early chapters But author! If ever you write a new novel please don't add too much information which does not have any relation or sense to the story. Like if MC has to walk to the building next door and the time MC reach that building chapter is completed. Like in this novel, the information which can be leasily described at most 2 paragraphs you are describing that on whole chapters by adding as if Mc is thinking if he had done this that scenerio would have happened he regret doing this bla bla bla. You are not WRITTING an essay. So, don't destroy your novel by adding too much nonsense. 🙏