Review Detail of Trueon in Death, Devotion, Dissonance

I really want to like this novel. It has almost everything. Good plot development, well written characters, and a good science-based magic system. However... The grammar is downright terrible. Every chapter or two, there're a plethora of mistakes which take away from the immersion/experience. Bad punctuation, multiple missing words in a single sentence, and incorrect capitalizations are a few that come to mind. I had to drop the novel somewhat early on because I just couldn't keep reading. Author NakedApron, if you see this review, please take the time to edit some of your chapters or hire an editor. It would drastically improve the reading experience. As it stands, this novel is not deserving of its 4.9 star rating.