Review Detail of Illona_sama_5462 in Death, Devotion, Dissonance

Item: Death, Devotion, Dissonance
Rating: 5

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Illona_sama_5462Lv32yrIllona_sama_5462

Hello, your story is great. Wish you can do good in the WSA competition and that you can drive further in your story. I was thinking, do you have any expertise in writing, and do you know how to put on dialogues in stories? I'm waiting for your response in the comments. Good luck!

Death, Devotion, Dissonance

NakedApron

Liked it!

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NakedApronAuthorNakedApron

Thank you for the kind words! Can u tell me more about your question? Cuz dialogues are kind of a super broad subject :<

2yr

Illona_sama_5462Lv3Illona_sama_5462

Ok! I have a book that I think the dialogues are not good. Can you check for me? Feel free to do it in your free time and comment on me. The name: "Virtual Fantasy World." Thank you!

NakedApron:Thank you for the kind words! Can u tell me more about your question? Cuz dialogues are kind of a super broad subject :<

2yr

NakedApronAuthorNakedApron

Ok ill give it a read when i wake up tomorrow morning :3

Illona_sama_5462:Ok! I have a book that I think the dialogues are not good. Can you check for me? Feel free to do it in your free time and comment on me. The name: "Virtual Fantasy World." Thank you!

2yr

Illona_sama_5462Lv3Illona_sama_5462

Thank you so much!

NakedApron:Ok ill give it a read when i wake up tomorrow morning :3

2yr