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Review Detail of TheGrandMemerofQI in Ascension of the Nephilim

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I was shocked how no reviews point out how bad the lack of actual editing is in the initial chapters. There is little to no explanation of what is happening, just a massive info dump and random character names thrown at you without any connection fostered between the reader and the story. Hardly any world-building leads to large portions of chapters feeling tedious and a time waste to read. Bad sentence flow, poor wording and terrible jokes made me drop this. The overall premise of the novel is interesting. However poorly executed and very generic regarding naming.

Ascension of the Nephilim

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