Review Detail of theanneleen in Duality or destiny?

Gonna be a bit brutal with my review. Although the "The Confession" chapter made me really wanna read on, but when the first chapter came, I kinda lost the interest to read. It was a good start with the "The Confession" chapter because it really made me want to know what happened before that. And I like that it started with a high point scene, but yeah just got a bit disappointed with Chapter one. It would have been great if there were character descriptions for Dae Ju and Tae Ri. I was confused who was talking who in the middle parts. But still, I think this one has a potential. Really really enjoyed reading "The Confession" part! Just need a little edit of a thing or two.