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Review Detail of Chizaru in Reincarnated With The Strongest System

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The Rollercoaster of Absurdity Your plot is like watching a soap opera written by someone who forgot to take their ADHD medication. I mean, we start with a noble mission to save the parents, only to end up in a divine melodrama where Grandpa turns out to be Zeus reincarnate. And William Pendragon? Sounds like a name you'd get if you mixed up a medieval fantasy novel with a bad D&D campaign (I don't even play D&D). But let’s address the elephant in the room: the hero with a harem of eight wives. Polygamy: A Harmful Fallacy Real-Life Context Polygamy, despite being romanticized in some cultures and stories, is often fraught with issues in real life. Historically, it’s true that many ancient kings and sultans had large harems, but let’s not kid ourselves about how they maintained them: through manipulation, coercion, and outright force. The idea of eight elite, beautiful, and selfless women willingly sharing one guy in a harmonious utopia is more of a teenage fantasy than reality. Modern World Ethical and Social Critique Most developed societies recognize that polygamy can be harmful, especially to women. Here are some reasons why: 1. Power Imbalance: Often, polygamy exacerbates the power dynamics between genders, leaving women with little to no agency. 2. Emotional Toll: It’s emotionally taxing to share a partner, leading to jealousy, rivalry, and psychological stress. 3. Economic Strain: Supporting multiple spouses and numerous children can strain resources, leading to poverty and neglect. 4. Legal Complications: Many countries outlaw polygamy because it complicates inheritance laws, divorce proceedings, and child custody battles. The Fantasy vs. Reality In your story, the MC’s multiple romantic partners are depicted as elite women (Queens, nobles and also a girl from a world like ours') brought up with etiquette, who magically don’t mind sharing. This is about as realistic as believing the Earth is flat in this world. Women with high self-esteem, education, and social standing are not likely to accept such an arrangement even if they are emotionally or financially manipulated. In most cultures where polygamy is practiced, it is often out of necessity or coercion rather than genuine choice. For instance, in some poorer Muslim-majority countries, polygamy persists due to socioeconomic pressures rather than ethical acceptance. Author's Fantasies vs. Respect for Women The author’s portrayal of the MC’s love life reads like a wish-fulfilment fantasy. It’s not just lazy writing; it’s a disservice to the complexity and individuality of women. Respecting women means understanding their desires, ambitions, and boundaries. Relationships are nuanced and multifaceted, requiring empathy and mutual respect and most importantly equality. The fact that all the women in the story are cool with polygamy because “it happens in this world” is just a lame excuse to justify the author’s fantasies. It’s like saying, “Everyone in this world loves pineapple on pizza because I said so.” Just because you can create a world doesn’t mean you can ignore basic human psychology and social dynamics when writing character relationships. Final Thoughts The author needs to grow up and recognize that meaningful relationships are built on mutual respect, understanding, and equality. The fantasy of a harem of selfless supermodel like woman is just that—a harmful fallacy. In reality, such setups are fraught with complications and often stem from a lack of respect for women’s autonomy and rights. So, let’s hope the next storyline has more depth, respect for characters, and a plot that doesn’t feel like it was concocted during a boner in your pants, caffeine-fuelled all-nighter. I am really sad that this story went in the path that it did. But I will definitely read a story of yours in which there is no harm a in which realistic display of human relationships and conveyed.

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Elyon

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