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Review Detail of OtakuModeEngage in Reincarnated With The Strongest System

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This was a Great novel. Truly, I could go on endlessly about why I loved it. So let's skip that, instead, I'd rather focus on my sole dissatisfaction. The army of women the protagonist married, or more precisely, the lack of romance preceeding many of these marriages. When the rule that he could only have 10 wives was first introduced near the begining of the story, I really liked it. I thought, unlike most harem novels, in this one, all his relationships would be well developed and meaningful. Later when you broke the rule, I was okay with it, because the ladies he broke it for, earned it. But as you continued to pile on more and more towards the end, that quickly stopped being the case. Many of the wives he married, never really got enough time to develope as characters, much less develope meaningful romantic bonds with the male lead. It felt forced in some cases, and rushed in most. You did write a short sentence for each of them, explaining how their relationships developed off page, but I think that was a mistake. One of the core rules of writing is show it, don't say it. I hope this is something you can improve upon in your next novel!

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