Still reading through the story but this is my reciew as of Chapter 50: It’s a decent story but lacks some realism and details that would parallel reality in a way that would make the story more relatable. Some phrases used don’t match what they are defined as and at times a clear disregard for common sense even if it is a fantasy; such as letting small children swim in a “river” that is over 100 meters deep unsupervised and even lies outside of their village gates, right after they were just attacked by hundreds of monsters.
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