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Honestly I don’t have much issues with rn as I am in the 180s I like the novel and would finish cause I like stuff like this and hope it gets better. However there are two things annoying me rn 1. Why does he seem to share his power with every single damn person and tell so many people his secrets I know he keeps talking about not wanting to be like light novel protagonists however to me that’s extremely naive and too irrational. if he shared it with some or at least kept a few things to himself it’s understandable however he says too much in my opinion and he maybe to just me he always feels vulnerable. 2. I’m on like 180 and this guy is frankly damn weak to be very honest here. How can someone with so many skills and basically dual cultivation since he both levels up and cultivates a mana core with a broken attribute be struggling so much just to cross ranks and beat a rank 3 goblin? If you don’t wanna make the Mc too op that’s cool but you can give him mind blowing cheats and plot armour then make him struggle to just cross a little rank I don’t like that I feel it may get better latter on but it’s just isane. He at like spiritual soul in soul cultivation which is smth I doubt even a rank 4 can even have not to mention being like level 27 along with his rank 2 void core its absolute bonkers to me that he simply can’t cross one rank to beat a single newly ascended goblin since the start till now the Mc feels way too weak. Other than those two great novel I’m still reading and would go on just hope this guy gets stronger

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